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Holy is the Lord → превод на румънски
Holy is the Lord
Sfînt este Dumnezeu
Благодаря! ❤ | ||
1 получена благодарност |
Подробности за благодарностите:
1. | How Great Thou Art |
2. | Gloria In Excelsis Deo |
3. | Jesus loves me |
I wouldn't have rated the translation as "awful". Maybe the reviewer didn't consider you used a religious vocabulary.
Try changing
forța - tăria
We bow down - Îngenunchem
worship - slăvim
glory - slava
It’s rising up - Se înalță
All around - Peste tot în jur,
It's the anthem of the Lord’s renown - Preaslăvit e numele Domnului (lui Dumnezeu)
So, the main problem seems to be not enough "slava". :) It's not an Orthodox song, so it probably won't be rated as excellent. Or maybe the one who didn't like it is not Christian. I'm not a religious person myself, but I like some Christian songs.
I wondered if the person didn't like the song for some reason. I didn't expect it to be rated very high...I kind of did this for a challenge, as I'm not a religious person either and don't have an extensive religious vocabulary in any of my three languages (and dictionaries don't always offer the best choices), but "awful" didn't seem to fit a grammatically correct, reasonably accurate translation and I wondered if there was something I just wasn't seeing. Thanks for the suggestions, btw. I'll edit and add a little "slava" :)
~K
Thanks :)
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It would be very helpful if those rating translations as "poor" would please explain. I have looked over this translation and have not really found much wrong with it. If there is something I can learn, I certainly want to know.
Thanks,
~K