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Holy is the Lord

We stand and lift up our hands
For the joy of the Lord is our strength
We bow down and worship Him now
How great, how awesome is He
And together we sing
 
Chorus:
Holy is the Lord God almighty
The earth is filled with his glory
Holy is the Lord God almighty
The earth is filled with His glory
The earth is filled with His glory
 
We stand and lift up our hands
For the joy of the Lord is our strength
We bow down and worship Him now
How great, how awesome is He
And together we sing, everyone sing
 
Chorus:
 
(2x’s)
It’s rising up
All around
It’s the anthem of the Lord’s renown
 
Together we sing
And everyone sing
 
Chorus:
 
(3x’s)
Holy, holy is the Lord almighty
Holy, holy
 
Превод

Sfînt este Dumnezeu

Stăm în picioare şi ne ridicăm mîinile
Căci bucuria Dumnezeului e tăria noastră
Îngenunchem şi Îl slăvim acum
Cît de mare, cît de minunat este El!
Şi împreună cîntăm
 
Cor:
Sfînt este Domnul Dumnezeu atotputernic
Pămîntul este plin de slava Lui
Sfînt este Domnul Dumnezeu atotputernic
Pămîntul este plin de slava Lui
Pămîntul este plin de slava Lui
 
Stăm în picioare şi ne ridicăm mîinile
Căci bucuria Dumnezeului e tăria noastră
Îngenunchem şi Îl slăvim acum
Cît de mare, cît de minunat este El!
Şi împreună cîntăm, toată lumea cîntă
 
Cor:
 
2X
Se înalţă
Peste tot în jur
Preaslăvit e numele Domnului.
 
Împreună cîntăm
Şi toată lumea cîntă
 
Cor:
 
3X
 
Sfînt, Sfînt este Domnul Dumnezeu atotputernic
Sfînt, sfînt
 
Christian Hymns & Songs: 3-те най-преглеждани
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Katherine0825Katherine0825
   четвъртък, 03/11/2011 - 03:25

It would be very helpful if those rating translations as "poor" would please explain. I have looked over this translation and have not really found much wrong with it. If there is something I can learn, I certainly want to know.

Thanks,
~K

CalusarulCalusarul    четвъртък, 03/11/2011 - 17:56

I wouldn't have rated the translation as "awful". Maybe the reviewer didn't consider you used a religious vocabulary.

Try changing
forța - tăria
We bow down - Îngenunchem
worship - slăvim
glory - slava
It’s rising up - Se înalță
All around - Peste tot în jur,
It's the anthem of the Lord’s renown - Preaslăvit e numele Domnului (lui Dumnezeu)

So, the main problem seems to be not enough "slava". :) It's not an Orthodox song, so it probably won't be rated as excellent. Or maybe the one who didn't like it is not Christian. I'm not a religious person myself, but I like some Christian songs.

Katherine0825Katherine0825
   петък, 04/11/2011 - 02:24

I wondered if the person didn't like the song for some reason. I didn't expect it to be rated very high...I kind of did this for a challenge, as I'm not a religious person either and don't have an extensive religious vocabulary in any of my three languages (and dictionaries don't always offer the best choices), but "awful" didn't seem to fit a grammatically correct, reasonably accurate translation and I wondered if there was something I just wasn't seeing. Thanks for the suggestions, btw. I'll edit and add a little "slava" :)
~K

CalusarulCalusarul    събота, 05/11/2011 - 15:35

Katherine, don't forget to capitalize every letter of the pronouns that refer to/replace God (slava Lui).

CalusarulCalusarul    неделя, 06/11/2011 - 17:40

I was afraid you'd get to hell or somethng because you didn't show Capital Respect.
(Hope God has a sense of humour)