Indecent proposal

Spanisch

Propuesta Indecente

 

Hola me llaman romeo es un placer
conocerla
que bien te vez te adelanto no me
importa quien sea el
digame usted si ha hecho algo
travieso alguna ves
una aventura es mas divertida si huele a peligro

Si te invito una copa si te
y me acerco a tu boca si te robo
un besito a ver no te enojas conmigo
que dirias si esta noche te seduzco en mi coche
que se empañen los vidrios y la regla es que gozes
si te falto el respeto yo no culpo al alcohol si levanto
tu falda me darias el derecho
de medir tu sensates poner en juego tu cuerpo
si te parece prudente esta propuesta indecente

A ver a ver permiteme apreciar tu desnudes
relajate que este martini calmara tu timidez
una aventura es mas divertida si huele a peligro

Si te invito una copa si te
y me acerco a tu boca si te robo
un besito a ver no te enojas conmigo
que dirias si esta noche te seduzco en mi coche
que se empañen los vidrios y la regla es que gozes
si te falto el respeto yo no culpo al alcohol si levanto
tu falda me darias el derecho
de medir tu sensates poner en juego tu cuerpo
si te parece prudente esta propuesta indecente

I’m back its feels good to be king

Hey you I know what you like
you and I me and you bailamos bachata y luego
you and I me and you terminamos en la cama
you and I me and you bailamos bachata y luego
you and I me and you terminamos en la cama

Hay chichi llora guitarra llora

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Englisch

Indecent proposal

Versions: #1#2#3

Hi, they call me Romeo, nice to
Meet you
You look so good, I'll be straight with you,
It doesn't matter who he is
Tell me if you have ever done something
Naughty
An adventure is more amusing if it smells of danger

And if I invite you to a drink
And I get close to your mouth, if I steal you
A one little kiss, we'll see if you don't come with me
What would you say if I seduced you in my car tonight?
Let the glasses fog and the rule is to enjoy
If I disrespect you, I don't blame alcohol, if I pull up your skirt
Would you give me the consent
To measure your sensibility, put your body into play
If it seems prudent to you this indecent proposal

Come on, allow me to appreciate your nakedness
This martini'll calm your shyness
An adventure is more amusing if it smells of danger

And if I invite you to a drink
And I get close to your mouth, if I steal you
A one little kiss, we'll see if you don't come with me
What would you say if I seduced you in my car tonight?
Let the glasses fog and the rule is to enjoy
If I disrespect you, I don't blame alcohol, if I pull up your skirt
Would you give me the consent
To measure your sensibility, put your body into play
If it seems prudent to you this indecent proposal

I'm back, it feels good to be king

Hey you I know what you like
You and I me and you dance bachata* and then
You and I me and you ended up in bed
You and I me and you dance bachata and then
You and I me and you ended up in bed

Oh chichi, cry, guitar, cry

Von ab_cd123 am Di, 30/07/2013 - 17:13 eingetragen
Last edited by ab_cd123 on So, 15/12/2013 - 18:42
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* A style of dance that originated in the Dominican Republic

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hillary.vite     Juli 31st, 2013
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Love this song!

ab_cd123     August 1st, 2013

Thanks for rating my translation Smile

polackin     August 6th, 2013

before 'you and I, me and you' he sings 'how about if..'
great song and your tranlastion is very good. I especially like that you consider the fact that people might not know Bachata. Smile good job

ab_cd123     August 7th, 2013

polackin wrote:
before 'you and I, me and you' he sings 'how about if..'
---> I don't know what you're talking about. Can you please explain it better to me?

Daniella_Santoss     September 22nd, 2013

Who ever wrote this needs to learn English and Spanish a little bit more.. The English version does not make sense.

ab_cd123     September 30th, 2013

Well maybe you could let me know what are the mistakes in English instead of telling me to learn it better.

bayamon119     November 12th, 2013

que bien te vez te adelanto no me
importa quien sea el

proper translation:
you look so good, ill be upfront i dont
care who he is

una aventura es mas divertida si huele a peligro

proper translation: an adventure is more fun if it smells of danger

y me acerco a tu boca si te robo
un besito a ver no te enojas conmigo

proper translation:
and i get close to your lips if i steal
a kiss, okay, don't get angry with me

permiteme apreciar tu desnudes
relajate que este martini calmara tu timidez

proper translation:
allow me to appreciate your nakedness
relax, this martini will calm your shyness

Hay chichi llora guitarra llora

proper translation:
oh chichi, cry, guitar, cry!

those are better translations of the song.

ab_cd123     November 13th, 2013

Hi. Thank you for proofreading my translation.

1) About this: "you look so good, ill be upfront i dont
care who he is", no, I don't agree with you. There he says that she looks very good, but that he doesn't care about some "he", probably her boyfriend or something.

2) "an adventure is more fun if it smells of danger"--> this is not gramatically correct, comparation of adjective "fun" is "funnier" and not "more fun". If you don't believe, check here, I made sure: http://www.thefreedictionary.com/funnier.

3) "and i get close to your lips if i steal
a kiss, okay, don't get angry with me"--> I accepted this suggestion and adjusted it to one that sounds more natural to me according to Spanish lyrics.

4) "allow me to appreciate your nakedness
relax, this martini will calm your shyness"--> okay, seems correct to me

5) "oh chichi, cry, guitar, cry!"--> okay

Thanks again for your suggestions. By the way, is English or Spanish your native language and if not, how good you speak them?

surtur     Dezember 14th, 2013

Translations, do not always go verbatim, especialy with spainsh (its often a bit backwards) CONTEXT IS EVERYTHING

#1 the Spainish version is off, more accurate lyrics at...
lyrics: http://www.lyricsmania.com/propuesta_indecente_lyrics_romeo_santos.html
All about Romeo Santos: http://www.musictory.com/music/Romeo+Santos

1) "que bien te vez...................................te adelanto no meimporta quien sea el"
"You look so good," is fine but "other is not Important to me who is he" does not translate well either way.
*** he's not saying 'other'. 'adelante' is more aside/by/next to her http://www.spanishcentral.com/translate/adelante
Hes basically stating that "whoever shes with it doesn't matter who he is.*** so obviously its a guy shes with
"que bien te vez, te adelanto no me importa quien sea el"
"You look so good, next to you doesn't matter me who he is" (doesn't matter whose next to you)

2) "una aventura es mas divertida si huele a peligro" sounds better when translated to "an adventure is more-fun/funner if it smells like/of danger/dangerous"
*** 'mas'= more, 'Divertido' can have various translations, like exciting, entertaining and fun (you could combine 'mas divertida' into 'funner' but using 'amusing' does not fit well with the context of the song/lyrics what they're doing is enjoyable/fun but not amusing, its a seduction not a fart joke... http://www.spanishcentral.com/translate/divertido ""***

^^^Also BIG diffrence between "Si te invito una copa" AND
"I'll buy you a drink"
the song title is 'Propuesta Indecente' meaning 'Indecent proposal' so when the singer says "SI te invito una copa" he is ASKING
"IF I invite you to a cup/drink/beverage..." and then he gives the rest of his whole proposal/what ifs, otherwise if you cut that out it sounds very presumptuous, and changes the whole tone of what hes ASKING/proposing to her, especially since its the chorus/title of the song...
**** http://www.spanishcentral.com/translate/si "SI" in this case translating to "IF" ****

Theres also a typo in "Si te invito una copa ^si te^ y me acerco a tu boca si te robo"
does not have ^si te^ in the song, so removing it would properly translate from
"Si te invito una copa y me acerco a tu boca si te robo un besito"
"If I invite you to a drink, and I get close to your lips, if I rob/steal a kiss..."

Spanish is my Second/First language, both parents are Spain/South American, Mother is Spanish teacher, grammer and context is everything.

surtur     Dezember 14th, 2013

the spanish translations are off for starters (keeping the symbols also help better understand what is being asked/said)

http://www.musica.com/letras.asp?letra=2145650
http://www.lyricsmania.com/propuesta_indecente_lyrics_romeo_santos.html

Context is everything and the Translation is off and takes the whole sensual tone of seduction out

___________________ Lyrics >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Translation______________________________
Above___________________________________Real__________________________________English
Hola me llaman romeo _______________ Hola... me llaman Romeo,_______________ Hello.... they call me Romeo
es un placer conocerla _______________ Es un placer conocerla_______________It is a pleasure to meet you.

que bien te vez_______________________ Que bien te ves,___________________ You look so good,
te adelanto no me ______ Te adelanto, no me importa quién sea él_______I'll be straight with you, it doesnt matter who he is,
importa quien sea el
digame usted si ha hecho algo _________________Dígame usted, _______________________ Tell me,
algo travieso alguna ves _________Si ha hecho algo travieso alguna vez. ______If you've ever done something naughty
una aventura es mas divertida_______ Una aventura es más divertida________________An adventure is more exciting
si huele a peligro__________________________ Si huele a peligro. ____________________ if it smells of danger.

Si te invito una copa 'si te' ______________Y si te invito a una copa __________________And If I invite you a drink,
y me acerco a tu boca _________________ Y me acerco a tu boca. _____________________ And I get close to your lips,
si te robo un besito __________________ Si te robo un besito,___________________________ If I stole a little kiss,
a ver no 'te enojas' conmigo __________Al ver que no vas conmigo. _______________ we'll see if you don't come with me.

que dirias si esta noche_______________¿Qué dirías si esta noche _______________?What would you say if tonight
te seduzco en mi coche _______________Te seduzco en mi coche?_______________ I seduced you in my car?
que se empañen los vidrios ___________Que se empañen los vidrios_______________ That the glass fogs up
y la regla es que gozes_______________ si la regla es que goces._______________ If the rule is that you enjoy

si te falto el respeto_______________Si te falto el respeto _________________________ If I disrespect you,
yo no culpo al alcohol _______________y luego culpo al alcohol. _____________and then blame the alcohol.
si levanto tu falda_______________ Si levanto tu falda, _________________________ If I lifted your skirt,
me darias el derecho_______________¿Me darías el derecho ____________________?Would you give me the consent
de medir tu sensates_______________A medir tu sensatez?______________________to measure your sensability?

poner en juego tu cuerpo____________Poner en juego tu cuerpo,___________________ Put your body into play
si te parece prudente _______________ Si te parece prudente,___________________________ If it seems prudent to you,
esta propuesta indecente____________ Esta propuesta indecente. _______________________ This proposition Indecent.

A ver a ver ______________________________A ver, a ver,______________________________Lets see, lets see,
permiteme apreciar tu desnudes ______ Permíteme apreciar tu desnudez._________ Permit me to appreciate your nudity
_____________________________________(take it off)_____________________________________(take it off)____________
relajate________________________________ Relájate, _____________________________________Relax _______________
que este martini calmara tu timidez _______Que este Martini calmará tu timidez._____That this martini calms your timidness
una aventura es mas divertida________Una aventura es más divertida_______________An adventure is more exciting
si huele a peligro______________________Si huele a peligro.______________________________if it smells of danger.

Si te invito una copa 'si te' ______________Y si te invito a una copa __________________And If I invite you a drink,
y me acerco a tu boca _________________ Y me acerco a tu boca. _____________________ And I get close to your lips,
si te robo un besito __________________ Si te robo un besito,___________________________ If I stole a little kiss,
a ver no 'te enojas' conmigo __________Al ver que no vas conmigo. _______________ we'll see if you don't come with me.

que dirias si esta noche_______________¿Qué dirías si esta noche _______________?What would you say if tonight
te seduzco en mi coche _______________Te seduzco en mi coche?_______________ I seduced you in my car?
que se empañen los vidrios ___________Que se empañen los vidrios_______________ That the glass fogs up
y la regla es que gozes_______________ si la regla es que goces._______________ If the rule is that you enjoy

si te falto el respeto_______________Si te falto el respeto _________________________ If I disrespect you,
yo no culpo al alcohol _______________y luego culpo al alcohol. _____________and then blame the alcohol.
si levanto tu falda_______________ Si levanto tu falda, _________________________ If I lifted your skirt,
me darias el derecho_______________¿Me darías el derecho ____________________?Would you give me the consent
de medir tu sensates_______________A medir tu sensatez?______________________to measure your sensability?

poner en juego tu cuerpo____________Poner en juego tu cuerpo,___________________ Put your body into play
si te parece prudente _______________ Si te parece prudente,___________________________ If it seems prudent to you,
esta propuesta indecente____________ Esta propuesta indecente. _______________________ This proposition Indecent.

I’m back
Its feels good to be king.

Hey,
Listen,
I know what you like.

How about you and I
Me and you
Bailamos bachata. (Bailamos- we'll dance bachata)
Y luego (and later)
You and I
Me and you
Terminamos en la cama (we'll continue in the bed)
(Que rico). (how delicious)

How about you and I,
Me and you
Bailamos bachata
(Ay bailamos bachata)
Y luego
You and I
Me and you
Terminamos en la cama (we'll continue in the bed)
(Terminamos en la cama). (we'll continue in the bed)

How about it you and I (You and I)
Me and you (Me and you)
You and I (You and I)
Me and you (You)
You and I (You and I)
Me and you
(I’m a bad boy)
Me and you (You).

(Ay chi chi
Llora guitarra
Llora).

Me llaman is "they call me" not "me llamo" which would translate to "i'm called/my name is..."

&^&^&^ the lyrics are actually "al ver que no vas conmigo. " NOT "a ver no te enojas conmigo"
so he's not asking her not to be upset at him, he's tempting that he bets she will come with him "al ver que " lets see if "no vas conmigo" you don't go with me"
so he's being tempting and saying that if he steals a kiss, hes challenging her to go with him

ab_cd123     Dezember 15th, 2013

Hi. Thank you very much for proofreading my translation and helping me with it!

I've corrected the most of your suggestions, the rest is a matter of style.
I have a question for you: Are you a native Spanish speaker?