Hello Sabina,
It seems to me that you need to change from "when you dream about me, dream about me" to "when you dream, dream about me" and similar "When I dream about you, I dream about you" to "When I dream, I dream about you".
It will be closer to the original.
Best wishes,
George
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Sabina,
And also regarding the second line. In English, the word "door" has only one syllable, so it is difficult to sing an ending like echo "or, or, or". Because the "or" alone has the meaning of alternatives, "this or that". Maybe it's better to put a wicket in instead of the door. "Wicket", like the "vrata", has two syllables. Then it will be: "knock on the wicket ket, ket ket" and is very similar to what Tanja sings: "potrkaj mi, na vrata ta, ta, ta".
I greet you,
George
In English, the word "door" has only one syllable, so it is difficult to sing an ending like echo "or, or, or". Because the "or" alone has the meaning of alternatives, "this or that". Maybe it's better to put a wicket in instead of the door. "Wicket", like the "vrata", has two syllables. Then it will be: "knock on the wicket ket, ket ket" and is very similar to what Tanja sings: "potrkaj mi, na vrata ta, ta, ta".
In second verse at the beginning "ta ta ta" is like echo.
Hope you like it ☺