Perfect!!!
Вона
She
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Антон Літвін | 2 years 6 months |
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Sophia_ | 7 years 3 months |
1. | Best Ukrainian Songs |
1. | Вона (Vona) |
2. | Кедь ми прийшла карта (Kedʹ my pryyshla karta) |
3. | Коли до губ твоїх (Koli do gub tvoïhk) |
Thank you!
Thank you, Sophia!
Thank you for reviewing one of my first song translations,.
Not sure about the "future tense" remark - "shall" and "will" - are expressing the future tense.
"crystals" - is a plural noun
Would you kindly point where the definite articles are missed?
I understand your concerns about "vaster" and "thrilled'. Those line should be ended with "..."
but a good point to review it in the future...
Will re-think the "borrowing" as well :)
Thanks again, made some changes... Hopefully it makes more sense now...
not today for sure tomorrow
friends will share the joy and sorrow
that's the time to drink some wine and chill
some will bring white-petaled asters
life is more than charms to master
yes the life is beautiful and real
2014 © Iouri Lazirko, translation.