Extra Nina - Три години (English translation)

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Bulgarian

Три години

Три години аз сама живях
Три години в самота и страх
Нито писа, нито се яви
Пусти да останат тез пари
 
Каза: Тръгваш за чужбина
Три години се измина
Нямам вече сили аз
Ни сълзи, ни глас
 
Пр: Не мога, не искам
Живот ли е това
Сърцето ми спира
От болка ще умра
Не зная къде си
И жив ли си дори
Не искай да чакам
Прости, прости ми ти
 
Три години аз сама живях
Три години бял ден не видях
Черно ли да нося или жив
С друга някъде си по-щастлив
 
Submitted by persik on Wed, 29/02/2012 - 11:07
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English translation

Three years

Three years I lived alone
Three years of loneliness and fear
You neither wrote, nor appeared
Damn all this money
 
You said that you went abroad
Three years passed
I have no more strength,
No more tears nor voice
 
Refrain: I can't, I don't want
Is this life?
My heart is stopping
I will die from pain
I don't know where you are
And whether you are alive
Don't want to wait!
Forgive, forgive me
 
Three years I lived alone
Three years I suffered
Should I wear black clothes or you are alive and with another woman somewhere you are happier?
 
Submitted by the sweet cat_989 on Mon, 11/09/2017 - 08:53
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Ivan U7n    Mon, 11/09/2017 - 19:32

Hi! And again some my small suggestions:
Three years in loneliness and fear → Three years of loneliness and fear (sounds better)
Damn these money → Damn all this money (money is uncountable, thus singular)
I don't have strengths anymore → I don’t have strength anymore (the same)
I left with no tears, with no voice → nor tears, nor voice (to be consecutive)

the sweet cat_989    Mon, 11/09/2017 - 21:28

Мерси :) редактирах и четирите превода

Ivan U7n    Mon, 11/09/2017 - 22:35

Още една малка забележка от мен да го направи по-добре:
I don't have strength anymore
Nor tears, no voice

I have no more strength,
No more tears nor voice