Against the tide (Contra a maré)

English translation

Against the tide

I row against the tide by day,
So much so that I risk to hurt my feet,
It could be a way to avoid the daylight
To wander at night in the moonlight, it could well be.
 
At night, through the shadows
The rivers, the waves run away
I am like a fish, but a blade
Of moonlight flickers
To prevent you from hiding.
 
I love to rise at dawn in my own good time
But I need a sunshade for my soul
My songs cannot be made by day,
Brightness works as an intruder, did you know?
 
At night lights dance
Above the star, come see them.
I am like a cunning shadow,
turning itself into a ballerina,
That dances with them.
 
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That I am not going to do when the song is yet to be translated in a literal way. I may be handling that part first, every now and then.
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Submitted by subterlabentia on Fri, 21/04/2017 - 14:02
Added in reply to request by Zarina01
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Contra a maré

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