High spirits (Beau fixe)

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English translation

High spirits

I rather like the red roses, the white roses
you offer me for bad or no reasons1
I also like to put some rouge on my white cheeks,
just for an evening, for any odd reason
I feel good in the laziness of our Sundays
I am farther away when it gets a bit cold
I'm only awaiting your warm shoulder to pour my heart out on...
I also like these small gestures
 
All this
is but hanging by a thread,
a breath of wind, a flutter of lashes.
Should one
of us slip away,
all this
is but hanging by a thread.
 
I also like it when I go wherever you like,
I like the day you come back just as much.
I would like to have quavering words for you,
to forget to loose my way.
I like so much to run to you breathlessly,
without keeping the best for last.
I only want to lay my hand in yours2
and lie down till early morning.
 
All this
is but hanging by a thread,
a breath of wind, a flutter of lashes.
Should one
of us slip away,
all this
is but hanging by a thread.
All this
is but hanging by a thread,
a breath of wind, a flutter of lashes.
Should one
of us slip away,
all this
is but hanging by a thread.
 
  • 1. she hijacks the expression "à tort ou à raison" (be it wrong or right) and replaces it with something that means "for wrong reasons or for no reason at all"
  • 2. the French also uses an unusual way of speaking
Do whatever you want with my translations. I'm not rich enough to sue you anyway.
Submitted by petit élève on Wed, 05/04/2017 - 00:58
Author's comments:

"beau fixe" means "(stable) sunny weather", but the song hints at the expression "avoir le moral au beau fixe" (to be in high spirits).

The French is rather delicate. I hope I did not make a mess trying to mirror it in English.

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