Skin Change (cambio de piel)

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Spanish

cambio de piel

Llegaste a mi como un sol
Despejando el cielo gris, Y tu luz alumbro
Donde habia oscuridad, Ahora estas tu
 
Todo es perfecto en verdad, Nada tengo que inventor
Eres vida, eres mas, De lo que siempre sone
Necesito de tu fe, Para entender
 
Como me cambio de piel, Y como vuelvo a nacer
Como le puedo explicar al Corazon, Que no hay peligro al creer en este amor
 
Como se puede romper
El miedo eterno a caer, Como le puedo ensensar a la razon
Que equivocarse es humano, Y es necesario el dolor
 
Ven ayudame a aprender como me cambio de piel
 
Perdoname si no se, Caminar sin tropezar
Es dificil burlar, Los temores de ayer
Necesito de tu fe, Para entender
 
Como cambio del piel , Y como vuelo a nacer
Como le puedo explicar al corazon, Que no hay peligro al creer en este amor
 
Como se puede romper, El miedo eterno a caer
Como le puedo ensenar a la razon, Y es necesario el dolor
 
Ven ayudame a apender, Como me cambio de piel
 
Eeeeso
 
Y como cambio, como cambio de piel
Como vuelvo a nacer, Dime tu como le hago
Como le digo, como le hago entender
Como cambio, como cambio de piel,
Dime como cambio, es que no se
Liberame los temores del ayer
Ayudame, Ayudame,
Hay vida mia ven ayudame
Te necesito ven ayudame, Como, y como cambio
 
Como me cambio de piel
Y como vuelvo a nacer
No hay peligro al creer en el amor
 
Submitted by lori.mercado.58 on Mon, 13/01/2014 - 16:14
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English translation

Skin Change

You came to me like a sun ,
Fading away the grey clouds, and your light lighted up
Where there was darkness, now you are there
 
All is perfect really, nothing I have to invent
You're my life,you're more than I ever dreamed
I need of your faith to understand
 
How can I change skin, and rebirth again
How can I explain to the heart
That there's no danger to believe in this love.
 
How can it be broken
The eternal fear to fall, How can I teach to the mind
That to make mistakes is part of human being, and it's necessary the pain
 
Come and help me to learn how I skin change
 
Forgive me if I don't know, to walk without trip over
It's hard to avoid the fears of yesterday
I need of your faith to understand
 
How can I change skin, and rebirth again
How can I explain to the heart
That here's no danger to believe in this love.
 
How can it be broken
The eternal fear to fall, How can I teach to the mind
That to make mistakes is part of human being, and it's necessary the pain
 
Come and help me to learn, How I skin change
 
That's it!
 
And how I change How I skin change
How to rebirth again, tell me How to do it
How I tell her, How can I make her understand
How I change, How I skin change
Tell me How I change, cause I don't know
Set me free from the fears of yesterday
Help me,help me
Ay life of mine, come to help me
I need you, come, help me, how and How I change
 
How I skin change
And How I rebirth again
There's no danger to believe in this love.
 
Submitted by Sweet Latina on Mon, 13/01/2014 - 17:27
Last edited by Sweet Latina on Wed, 15/01/2014 - 02:11
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roster 31     January 14th, 2014

Sweety, let me tell you:
In the third short stanza, I would repeat, "and how can I..." and then, "... explain to the heart..."
Fourth stanza - "broken"
Line after fourth stanza - "to learn how" (it's correct further down)

Translate "eso"

Sweet Latina     January 14th, 2014

Listo Rose!
Tongue
Pero no sé como traducir "esoo".. :/ qué me sugerís?

roster 31     January 14th, 2014

thaaat (?)

Sweet Latina     January 14th, 2014

Eso pensé pero es que él lo dice como arengando a que bailen

roster 31     January 15th, 2014

I think it refers to what it's said before:
"Come and help ne to learn,,,,,"
Thaaat's it!",
you can say.

Sweet Latina     January 15th, 2014

Smile thanks so much for ur help!