[SOLVED] Can someone please check this translation

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I just found that song Доедешь пиши (by Каспийский груз) and I feel like these guy rapping about something really deep. I checked the site and found the translation but I don't think that song translated well. So can you please check the translation, and translate the song if you can? Salute :)

Here's the song
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qXAoFeO5Xg8

And translation
http://lyricstranslate.com/tr/doedesh-pishi-%D0%B4%D0%BE%D0%B5%D0%B4%D0%...

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<a href="/en/translator/ivan-u7n" class="userpopupinfo" rel="user1297482">Ivan U7n </a>
Joined: 27.06.2016

After my quick overview, I’d give that translation a 2 out of 5, it looks much alike Google Translate. It's a way too literal translation and the resulting English in massively broken. The title should be “Text/Write when you get there/here” or something close. Unfortunately I don’t have enough time to do a translation.

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Oh, I thought so. Anyway, thanks Ivan.

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<a href="/en/translator/sandring" class="userpopupinfo" rel="user1263066">sandring </a>
Joined: 18.10.2015

I've corrected the lyrics, edited them properly and submitted footnotes to slang words. :)

Guest
Guest

You're so kind, Nadia. Thank you very much. With slang some lyrics became clear. But still there are some incomprehensible sentences in translation. Can you fix the translation, also?

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<a href="/en/translator/sandring" class="userpopupinfo" rel="user1263066">sandring </a>
Joined: 18.10.2015

First of all, the editing was wrong so some sentences looked corrupted. Of course, it not a translation at all but the guy did his best anyway. It's no problem to translate this song but only if you post a new request (it's allowed) and drop me the link. I have my own reasons for that.

Guest
Guest

Well, I can't make a new request because that song already had a English translation. But maybe you can make another translation (as if like something English #2 or 2 Version).

Guest
Guest

But if I can make a new request just show me the way and I'm gonna do it asap.

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<a href="/en/translator/sandring" class="userpopupinfo" rel="user1263066">sandring </a>
Joined: 18.10.2015
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<a href="/en/translator/sandring" class="userpopupinfo" rel="user1263066">sandring </a>
Joined: 18.10.2015

OK, don't bother I'll translate it for you

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Wait a sec, here it is :) And thank you very much, you'r the best :))

https://lyricstranslate.com/en/request/doedesh-pishi-%D0%B4%D0%BE%D0%B5%...

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<a href="/en/translator/sandring" class="userpopupinfo" rel="user1263066">sandring </a>
Joined: 18.10.2015
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Guest

Thanks a million, you just made my day :)

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<a href="/en/translator/sandring" class="userpopupinfo" rel="user1263066">sandring </a>
Joined: 18.10.2015

:)