Porno Riviste - Buoni sconto (English translation)

Proofreading requested
English translation

Coupons ( updated )

They clogged the city
of good and innocent ones
which explain that it makes sense
the disgust that you feel
 
They justify the western choice
they dress well
they judge us wrong
 
They sold jackets
to masses of beggars
so they spread
the style of the powerful
 
You are no longer there
there it's all automatic
happy clean
static positivist
 
We're sharpening these knives
we are heating up
 
They have split into zones
in classes and chapters
they invented the names , they have changed the titles
This is the stupids' world
the most stupid then commands the stupid
 
We are sharpening these knives
we are heating up
 
We're injecting wolf blood
in your car
 
Discount coupons in my hands
they stick to my fingers
I have no taste in the purchase
but I enjoy it in life
 
Coupons hanging from a thread
as a purpose of a life
I have no taste in the purchase
It's a definitive situation
 
Thanks a lot for your attention!

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Submitted by Berny Devlin on Tue, 14/11/2017 - 09:31
Author's comments:

A tough song from a new Italian emergent band.

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Buoni sconto

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Alma Barroca    Tue, 14/11/2017 - 19:01

The only difference between this and the other copy of the translation you added are: 'the suck where you feel' vs. 'the disgust that you feel' (l.4) and 'Discount coupons in my hands' vs. 'Discount coupons in your hands' (l.35). If you want to edit minor stuff like you did here, please don't add a new translation, simply edit the one you had already added. I have removed the 'previous' translation now.

Berny Devlin    Tue, 14/11/2017 - 21:00

Thank you, I tried to remove the previous translation, without success. You did a very right thing...Ciao!

MichaelNa    Tue, 14/11/2017 - 21:15
Berny Devlin wrote:

Thank you, I tried to remove the previous translation, without success. You did a very right thing...Ciao!

You don't need to remove it, you can simply go back and write over or modify any of you translations after your initial posting.