Sergey Babkin - Ne ubivay (Не убивай) (English translation)

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Russian

Ne ubivay (Не убивай)

Я устал считать дни
Вести нарочно дневник
Когда мы не одни
Небо опускается ниже
Мы оба, как ледник:
Наполовину видны,
А всё, что под водой
Знаем только мы с тобой
 
Припев(х2):
Не убивай из диктофона мои записи
Может быть когда-нибудь они станут песнями.
Может не до конца откровенно честными,
Как бы мне хотелось,
Но все о тебе.
 
С первых минут
Спускаясь ко дну,
Как пряник и кнут,
Прячем грусть под весёлую маску.
Около нас
Вселенной каркас.
И всё бы ничего,
Если бы только не детские сказки...
 
Припев(х2)...
 
Припев(х4)...
 
Submitted by Alexander Laskavtsev on Tue, 12/04/2016 - 19:56
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English translation

Don't Kill

I'm tired of counting the days
To keep a diary on purpose
When we are not alone
The sky falls lower
We both are like a glacier:
We are half visible,
But what is under the water,
Only me and you know that
 
Refrain(x2):
Don't kill my recordings from a voice recorder
Maybe someday they'll become the songs,
Maybe not fully sincerely honest,
As I wanted,
But all about you.
 
Since the first minutes
Going down to the bottom,
Like the carrot and stick,1
Hiding sorrow under the cheerful mask.
Around us
There's a frame of the Universe,
And all would be nothing,
If it were not just fairy tales...
 
Refrain(x2)...
 
Refrain(x4)...
 
  • 1. Originally "gingerbread and whip" - a russian idiom with the same meaning
Please don't hesitate to correct me, especially if the translation language is your native language.
With Best Regards,
© Alexander Laskavtsev
Submitted by Alexander Laskavtsev on Tue, 16/05/2017 - 14:10
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Bryan C.    Tue, 16/05/2017 - 14:26

- To keep a dairy(diary) on purpose
- If it were not just a fairy tales(tale)...