[SOLVED] Can someone please check this translation

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Super Member
Joined: 14.11.2013
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I just found that song Доедешь пиши (by Каспийский груз) and I feel like these guy rapping about something really deep. I checked the site and found the translation but I don't think that song translated well. So can you please check the translation, and translate the song if you can? Salute Regular smile

Here's the song
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qXAoFeO5Xg8

And translation
http://lyricstranslate.com/tr/doedesh-pishi-%D0%B4%D0%BE%D0%B5%D0%B4%D0%...

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Joined: 27.06.2016

After my quick overview, I’d give that translation a 2 out of 5, it looks much alike Google Translate. It's a way too literal translation and the resulting English in massively broken. The title should be “Text/Write when you get there/here” or something close. Unfortunately I don’t have enough time to do a translation.

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Joined: 14.11.2013

Oh, I thought so. Anyway, thanks Ivan.

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Joined: 18.10.2015

I've corrected the lyrics, edited them properly and submitted footnotes to slang words. Regular smile

Super Member
Joined: 14.11.2013

You're so kind, Nadia. Thank you very much. With slang some lyrics became clear. But still there are some incomprehensible sentences in translation. Can you fix the translation, also?

Editor /Languages Advocate
Joined: 18.10.2015

First of all, the editing was wrong so some sentences looked corrupted. Of course, it not a translation at all but the guy did his best anyway. It's no problem to translate this song but only if you post a new request (it's allowed) and drop me the link. I have my own reasons for that.

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Joined: 14.11.2013

Well, I can't make a new request because that song already had a English translation. But maybe you can make another translation (as if like something English #2 or 2 Version).

Super Member
Joined: 14.11.2013

But if I can make a new request just show me the way and I'm gonna do it asap.

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Joined: 18.10.2015
Editor /Languages Advocate
Joined: 18.10.2015

OK, don't bother I'll translate it for you

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Joined: 14.11.2013

Wait a sec, here it is Regular smile And thank you very much, you'r the best :))

http://lyricstranslate.com/en/request/doedesh-pishi-%D0%B4%D0%BE%D0%B5%D...

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Thanks a million, you just made my day Regular smile

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