An Innocent Warrior

English translation

An Innocent Warrior

Your eyes so full of wonder
Your heart, an innocent warior
My dearest one
There's a task for you
Let it flow over you
The freedom you feel
And your deep thoughts
Our young girl
Have you come
Our young girl
Your eyes so full of wonder
 
"Work hard in silence, let your success be your noise!"
Submitted by SilentRebel83 on Tue, 13/12/2016 - 00:55
Last edited by SilentRebel83 on Sat, 31/12/2016 - 01:58
Author's comments:

translation by Opetaia Foa'i.

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An Innocent Warrior

Comments
sashavitja     December 29th, 2016

Thank you for the translation! Can I ask you a question though? I do not know tokelauan, so I cannot understand the original text, but I was bit puzzled since I noticed that you translated "Ou mata e matagi" and "Maua ai te lumanai" in the same way. Why?

SilentRebel83     December 31st, 2016

You're welcome
Oh wow... I didn't notice the error. I'll recheck the source from which I got it from.
Thanks for the heads up! Smile