Not much love [ Malo lyubvi (Мало любви) ]

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Malo lyubvi (Мало любви)

Знать, -- о чём ты молчишь,
И читать по глазам –
Я училась так долго…
Только сбилась с пути
И иду по следам –
Босиком по осколкам…
 
Мы с тобой стали чужими –
Ты и я! Ты и я!
 
Мало любви, мало тебя, --
Даже, когда ты здесь со мною.
Знать не хочу, верить нельзя, --
Только в висках стучит от боли!
 
Это я! Я была – любимая!
Та – другая, но не я --
Твоё сердце разбила…
 
Не закончится жизнь,
Не разрушится мир, --
Если ты не вернёшься…
Только знай: никогда
Не прощу, если ты --
Даже не обернёшься…
 
В чём, скажи, я виновата?
Почему? Что не так?!
 
Мало любви, мало тебя, --
Даже, когда ты здесь со мною.
Знать не хочу, верить нельзя, --
Только в висках стучит от боли…
 
Это я! Я была – любимая!
Та – другая, но не я! --
Твоё сердце разбила…
О-о, о-о!
 
Мало любви, мало тебя, --
Даже, когда ты здесь со мною.
Знать не хочу, верить нельзя, --
Только в висках стучит от боли…
 
Это я! Я была – любимая!
Та – другая, но не я! --
Твоё сердце разбила…
 
Submitted by Marinka on Wed, 29/10/2014 - 04:55
Submitter's comments:

Музыка: Евгений Олейник,
Слова: Юлия Быкова

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English translation

Not much love

Knowing what you keep quiet about
and reading your eyes is something
I've learned so long ago.
I just lost my way,
and now I'm following you
threading on shards...
 
We became strangers,
you and me! You and me!
 
Not much love, not much of you
Even when you're here with me.
I don't want to know, I can't trust you,
my head is just pounding from the pain!
 
It's me! I was your only one!
And now this one, not me
broke your heart...
 
My life will not end,
the world will not come crashing down
if you don't come back...
Now be sure that I won't
ever forgive you, if
you don't even look back...
 
Just tell me what my fault is.
Why? What is wrong?
 
Not much love, not much of you
Even when you're here with me.
I don't want to know, I can't trust you,
my head is just pounding from the pain...
 
It's me! I was your only one!
And now this one, not me
broke your heart...
O-o..
...
 
Not much love, not much of you
Even when you're here with me.
I don't want to know, I can't trust you,
my head is just pounding from the pain...
 
It's me! I was your only one!
And now this one, not me
broke your heart...
 
Do whatever you want with my translations. I'm not rich enough to sue you anyway.
Submitted by petit élève on Thu, 16/03/2017 - 05:38
Added in reply to request by Zarina01
Author's comments:

With Anatoli's help that should be OK

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Comments
Kashtanka1965    Thu, 16/03/2017 - 06:35

Обернешься- to turn your head back,or look back, rather then "change"
По осколкам- it doesn't mean she walked barefoot on the glass. Maybe she was walking on shards of their love.
Cheers
Anatoli