Thank you for your translation but you can try easier songs with less idiomatic expressions.
Some corrections
"στο λούκι" is "down the drain"
"με κάποιο κολλητό μου" is "with a buddy (of mine)"
"στον δικό μου" is "to my man"
"Χριστιανοί" is "good people"
"φλιπάρω" is "flip out" since it has english origin
"χάνομαι" is "perishing" since here it means dying
"αχ, να 'μουνα" is "ah, I'd rather be"
"στα στήθια της" is "in her breasts" since if he were breeze or smoke she would inhale him
"σαν τρέμει το κορμάκι της και σαν λιγοθυμάει" is "for whom her body shivers and she feels like fainting"