Rita Guerra - No meu canto (English translation)

Proofreading requested
English translation

In My Corner

I know that I don't have you
I see you walking by
I know that I can't stand this
Even so I will wait
In my memory I keep a future
That didn't happen
Of a good dream...
 
I always think, "Could it be that he saw me!"
I want to believe that he felt...
This passion that makes me soar and then returns me to emptiness
 
I shout
I cry... I smile, in secret...
I want,
The fire, how cold... what fear I feel.
 
Will I feel love again one day?
I would like to be the only woman you see
So that I can hold and caress you in that future that did not happen,
Of a good dream
I sail within this dream, smiling
I wish so much that you feel
The truth in every word
I heard
 
I shout
I cry... I smile, in secret...
I want,
The fire, how cold... what fear I feel.
 
I can't free myself from you
You're the most beautiful book I read
I will stay here in my corner, hoping
That you look, hoping that you look at me
 
Hoping that you look at me
 
Submitted by Guest on Tue, 08/08/2017 - 19:31
Added in reply to request by Zarina01
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No meu canto

Comments
maluca    Wed, 09/08/2017 - 15:30

"canto" could mean "corner" here...

rainymoon    Wed, 09/08/2017 - 19:32

Thank you, Maluca! I will review this song
later and think about your suggestion. I
really appreciate it

rainymoon    Wed, 09/08/2017 - 20:56

So I'm going to implement these, and if you have any more comments, I'd love to hear them.
I am only a student, and I am very thankful again for your help