Nordheim (North)

Proofreading requested
English

North

Made a wish
'Neath the shooting star
Asked the bear
To guide my way
Frozen star
To set the path.
 
I return
Under cloak of night
Come I have
Unto the North
Home at last
Where I belong.
 
Submitted by SilentRebel83 on Mon, 24/07/2017 - 08:18
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German translation

Nordheim

Ich wünsche mir was
Unter der Sternschnuppe
Ich bat das Sternbild des Großen Bären
Um meine Reise zu leiten
Ein Fixstern
Um den Weg zu führen.
 
Ich kehrte zurück
Im Schutze der Dunkelheit
Ich bin gekommen
Nach Nordheim
Endlich heimgekehrt
Wo ich hingehöre!
 
"Work hard in silence, let your success be your noise!"
Submitted by SilentRebel83 on Mon, 24/07/2017 - 08:57
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