Rain (Yomg'ir)

Proofreading requested
English translation

Rain

I believed you are faithful,
I was thinking there's a faith in his soul,
You never looked directly into my eyes,
I was taking it for shamefacedness.
Your healful words, I was thinking
They are salvatory for my pain -
Or had you some grudge against me?
I believed you are faithful...
 
Light, light, it's a light rain,
Stroking my face it's raining,
The drops of it remind me of you,
Scratching my face it's raining. (x2)
 
I didn't expect this from you,
You've suddenly said: forget about me,
This is my mistake, I thought,
There is some mistake in the words of mine
Either you refused your promises,
Or took your mask off?
There's a light on his face, I was thinking,
I believed you are faithful...
 
Light, light, it's a light rain,
Stroking my face it's raining,
The drops of it remind me of you,
Scratching my face it's raining. (x2)
 
You ruined me and left me, my beloved,
Not nicely, mistakenly went you away,
For sake of other one you left me,
Separating yourself from me
Having scratched my soul you left me.
Oh! Why did I call you beloved?
I believed you are faithful...
 
Light, light, it's a light rain,
Stroking my face it's raining,
The drops of it remind me of you,
Scratching my face it's raining. (x2)
 
Please don't hesitate to correct me, especially if the translation language is your native language.
With Best Regards,
© Alexander Laskavtsev
Submitted by Alexander Laskavtsev on Fri, 19/05/2017 - 15:07
Added in reply to request by Saida FortunateOne
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Translated from Russian.

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