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Original lyrics
دریچه
من آوازم که می روم به سینه ی قبیله ای
نه به پرواز چشم من نمانده خواب پیله ای
سبز دریچه شو بکن زیان زرد پرده را
به شعر شاخه می رسد خیال خام ریشه ها
من و تو وارث خورشـید و ماهیم
من و تو نغمه ای بی اشتباهیم
تا زميني می چرخد تا هوا هواست
من و تو در جنونی سر به راهیم
Submitted by charlesyeg on 2015-01-20
Translation
The Hatch
I'm a song that goes to the heart of a tribe
No, to the flying of my eyes no cocoon's dream is left [ambiguous]
Turn into the green of the hatch and take out the yellow damage of the curtain
To the song of the branch will reach the raw imagination of the roots (= The wishful thinking of the roots will reach the poem of the branch)
You and I are the inheritors of the sun and the moon
You and I are an inerrant tune
As long as the earth turns around and the air is there
You and I are in a docile insanity [paradoxical] (OR: or we are docile in an insanity)
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Submitted by Fantasy on 2016-02-16
Added in reply to request by charlesyeg
Last edited by Fantasy on 2017-01-08
Author's comments:
The song uses literary images and metaphors and is ambiguous in most parts with its uncommon ordering of words. The original in Persian is open to interpretation.
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