You're Going (Sen Gidiyorsun)

English translation

You're Going

Your hands are going
Your voice is going
Your breath is going,but
You're going before them all
My tomorrow's going
My past is going
My life,my reason are going,but
You're going before them all
Your smell reminds on my cushion
The last witness of our lovemaking
You're going
Going is taking all the reminders
I don't know it but you know,surely
You're going
You owe me a blink
From your last going
Be the winner of this love
But let the last bullets
Be mine
Write it and play
All the scenes
But let the claps for us
Be mine
Submitted by dunkelheit on Sat, 04/12/2010 - 23:04
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Bulgarian rose6 years 15 weeks
    October 12th, 2012

Thank you for your translation attempt. Here are some comments/suggestions to improve your English translation:

1. block 3, line 1: you have "reminds"; it should be "remains"
2. block 3, line 2: you do not translate "Kalıyor" - how about: "It remains the last witness..."
3. block 5, line 2: you have "a blink"; it should be "a glimpse"
4. last block, line 3: you have "the claps"; it should be "the applause"

One other minor error - In English there should be a space following a comma.