What patience God has! (Ajab Sabri Khoda Darad)

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What patience God has!

What patience God has (From Moini Kermanshahi)

What patience god has,
If I were God,
At the first sight that I was seeing cruelty from a miscreant creature
Would destroy the world with all its beauty and inelegance
What patience God has!

If I were God, and was seeing that in front of hundreds of hungry neighbors, there was a banquet mirth and wassail,
I would silence the first drunken shout immediately at the tip of wine cup!
What patience God has!

If I were God and was seeing that one, is nude and shaking
and the other has worn hundreds of colored cloths,
I would conversed earth and sky
What patience God has!

If I were God, I wouldn't accept praying nor would hear to retraction of these tyrants and I would tear hundreds of letters from pious-like persons
What patience God has!

If I were God, I would make thousands beautiful Leilis' homeless and crazy just for desert nomad Majnun
What patience God has!

عجب صبری خدا دارد !

اگر من جای او بودم .

بگرد شمع سوزان ِ دل عشاق سرگردان ،

سراپای وجود بی وفا معشوق را ،

پروانه می کردم

What patience God has!
If I were God, I would turn the whole body of unfaithful beloved to a butterfly which swirl around the burning candle and wanderer lovers' heart!

If I were God, with all these patience and heavens that I had,
at the moment that I was seeing a dear person is selling ignominy, unduly
I would converse the earth's cycling impatiently
What patience God has!

If I were God, and was seeing that scientists and people are disturbed from this fatal, earth destroying science ,
I would destroy any intentions except love and troth in this legendary world!
What patience God has!

Why I should be in his place?!
That's better that he sits on his place because he can bear the ugly works of these creatures
Otherwise, If I was him, when I could make compromises with wise and unwise men at the same time?!

What patience God has!

Publicado por camellia el Jue, 20/09/2012 - 17:10
Comentarios del autor:

Sorry, I couldn't translate this part properly : If I was God, with all these patience and heavens that I had,
at the moment that I was seeing a dear person is selling ignominy, unduly

It needs a native in both english and persian!

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camellia     Septiembre 21st, 2012

by the way, this lyric is not complete, if I have time, I will put the complete one later, hope so...

ivank23     Septiembre 21st, 2012

You mean the original lyrics, or the translated ones?

camellia     Septiembre 22nd, 2012

The translate that I made right now, based on what it has been posted, is complete. But the original lyrics as far as I remember has some missed parts, I have to search and I will add the missed parts in the original then I translate them...

ivank23     Septiembre 22nd, 2012

It'd be great if you could do that. It's very important that the original lyrics are wholesome.

    Septiembre 22nd, 2012

ivank23 escribió:
It's very important that the original lyrics are wholesome.

Is this a new moderator requirement that lyrics be "wholesome"?

MayGoLoco     Septiembre 22nd, 2012

Ivank23 means that the lyrics have to be complete Wink

camellia     Septiembre 23rd, 2012

well, well, this part is missing:

عجب صبری خدا دارد !

اگر من جای او بودم .

بگرد شمع سوزان ِ دل عشاق سرگردان ،

سراپای وجود بی وفا معشوق را ،

پروانه می کردم

camellia     Septiembre 23rd, 2012

it must be placed between part 5 and 6:

What a patience God has!
If I was God, I would turn the whole body of unfaithful beloved to a butterfly which swirl around the burning candle and wanderer lovers' heart!

    Septiembre 23rd, 2012

There are two major errors in the translation:
1. In the title, the indefinite article, "a", should be removed to read: "What Patience God Has"
2. "If I was God" is grammatically incorrect. It should be "If I were God" (also: "if I was him" should be "if I were him"). This is a subjunctive phrase expressing an untrue condition - I am not God - so "were" must be used instead of "was."

camellia     Septiembre 24th, 2012

Done! Thx:)