Pluto - Convite (traducción al Inglés)

traducción al Inglés

Invitation

Yes, I don't say that just for me, I want you to taste what is yours
Just now I talked about what I feel
It's by the desire force to be me
 
By force of everything that is mine, you're everything I see
 
Yesterday, everything I wanted was to go up on your body
I passed by your fear, and I forgot your ego
It's everything what I see
 
Yesterday everything I wanted was to go up on your ego
I passed by your fear, and I forgot your ego
 
It's everything what I see
 
Suddenly the topic is topic
And you sink into the deepness to get away from love
Here I'll be, at the end of this long waiting, at that time when I was
and I can't be it again
 
Yes, I don't say that just for me, I want you to taste what is yours
Just now I talked about what I feel
It's by the desire force to be me
 
By force of everything that is mine, you're everything I see
 
Now I give up, because everytime I insist I forget that I do exist
This is just an invitation
 
Publicado por dowlenon1 el Sáb, 21/07/2012 - 13:00
Added in reply to request by Lemoncholic
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Convite

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harriet    Sáb, 21/07/2012 - 16:20

Good translation. I'll add one thing though:
És tudo o que eu vejo = You're everything I see

dowlenon1    Sáb, 21/07/2012 - 17:38

Thank you for your comment and your suggestion, it has been corrected.

Lemoncholic    Mié, 08/08/2012 - 19:59

So, this is the last song for me to check. Let's get it started.

>Yesterday everything I wanted was go up on your body
"...everything I wanted was to go up on your body." Same with "...on your ego."

>Now I give up, always that I insist on it I forget that I do exist
Here comes the tricky line. How about this? "Now I give up, everytime I insist I forget that I do exist."

That's all. Regular smile

dowlenon1    Mié, 08/08/2012 - 22:56

Hi again! Teeth smile

The second one I totally agree, I even would add "because everytime I insist..." to make it better. However, the first one I don't understand what you mean.

What you mean "Same with "... on your ego"? If you are talking about this part: "I passed by your fear, and I forgot your ego", would you suggest I put "and I forgot on your ego"?

Lemoncholic    Jue, 09/08/2012 - 09:32

I mean that you've forgotten to add the "to" before the verb, that's all. Wink smile

"Yesterday everything I wanted was to go up on your ego."

dowlenon1    Jue, 09/08/2012 - 10:07

Oh... yes, I saw.

Thanks, it has been corrected Regular smile