Edelstein

Hi Lenchik! Welcome to Lyrics Translate.

Your translation has a few mistakes and the title needs to be translated to English. Considering this is a German to English translation, it's best to write English or German in the "Author's Comment" area.

Here are a few suggestions for improvement:

Edelstein = precious stone, precious gem, or jewel.

1st block:
Lines 1 and 2: Alone in Paris, I was at our rendezvous.
Line 6: we both walk hand in hand
Line 7: “auf Zeit” implies that it doesn’t last too long. You could say, “a dream on limited time,” or simply "a dream which doesn't last too long."

2nd block: 1st line: Edelstein = “precious stone,” “gem,” or “jewel;” or even “precious gem,” which matches the syllables.
Line 2: in (etwas) hinein = into. “Let me into your heart.”
Line 4: “Edelstein” needs replaced with an English word.
Line 5: see 2nd block, line 2.

3rd Block: line 1-3: the first three lines are together: On pink paper, you write to me (that) you love me.
Line 4: (with) my eyes closed,
Line 7: see 1st block, line 6.
Line 8: see 1st block, line 7.

4th Block: see block 2.

5th and 6th block: the text repeats, I’d go ahead and finish the verses in English to match the German text.

Here are a few good online dictionaries, which should help you:

http://www.dict.cc/
http://www.linguee.com/
http://www.thefreedictionary.com/
http://www.leo.org/

I did this translation without on - line dictionaries. That's a precios stone of course. But in this song, the author means the girl as you can see, and that's may - be was her name.

and...may - be not!! However, Jewel is an English first name!!