Yorsh has already provided a definitive translation so yours is unnecessary. Also it is inaccurate in several places and ungrammatical in others. For example "buscar" doesn't mean find; it means search for. "LLenarme de ti" doesn't mean you complete me; it means fill me with you. " que sientas mujer" is perfectly good Spanish. But "that you feel woman" is not only not good English; it is not even bad English. It is not English at all. The correct rendering of the Spanish is "that you feel like a woman" Satisfy is not a good way to translate apagar; better to say I want to slake (or quench) my soul's thirst... Because the translation is unnecessary and not an improvement on Yorsh's (in fact it is much worse than his), it violates the guidelines and you should delete it.