Hi, Mahmoud,
Welcome to LT and congratulation for your first translation!
I've changed the original english text, so you can delete the english lines in your translation (also your "Author's comment") now.
Please change the title of your translation text, too. For Perian language (non-latin letters) it were good if the title had a shape like this for example:
"Persian title in latin letters (original persian title - maybe دیروزها)".
The name of the translator is written two times on the translation page, as you can see (1.: up side, between the song infos, 2.: at the right side "about the translators") ;)
Thank you.
I hope you'll have a nice stay here with us :)
There are typo errors in the song that is why I have decided to put English lines along with Persian ones to ease the access for the reader and correct the previous typed song.