Berliner25

Here are a few suggestion. But, since I'm not a native speak of English, it's up to you to decide. Să şadă toţi cum eu am şes = Let everyone sit as I sat Să vadă toţi şe eu învăț = Let anyone see what I am learning șe is Moldovan pronunciation of ce = what. And the lubrication part. In Romanian, since it's in a drinking context, it means to drink alcohol. I don't know whether or not "lubricate" could mean "to drink" in English. Personally, I don't think people who speak like that are less educated, I see them as Moldovans, speaking with a Moldavian accent. Our best poets were from Moldova - I guess :) (Moldova is a historical region divided into Romania, the Republic of Moldavia and smaller parts in Ukraine)

Greetings again! Just want to put in my 2 cents. Just know that I am no native German speaker, but I do however am able to _somewhat_ discern between the two (German --> English translations) =P Here we go... "Ich(I) atme(breath) dich(you) ein(in) und(and) nie(never) wieder(again) aus(out)" Lit. I breath you in and never out again. "I inhale you and never again to exhale" It may not be literally translated, but it is correct! Lass(let) dich(you) nicht(no) mehr(more) raus(out) Lit. Never let you out any/no more "Never to let you out" Again, it may not follow the source literally, but it is correct since it goes hand-in-hand nicely with the previous line. "Ich(I) trage(carry) dich(you) bei(with) mir(me) in(in) meiner(my) Brust(breast)" Lit. I carry you with/near me in my breast "I carry you with me in my heart" It's my understanding that "breast" in this context correlates with the heart (not the organ), bosom, chest, etc. So you're definitely right on point! "in(in) deinen(your) offenen(loose/open) Haaren(hair)" Lit. ...in your loose(ned) hair Your use of "flowing" matches perfectly with the source. Wonderful translation!

Perfect!

thanks Happy new year

The structure "dar nu-i nimic" refers to "but it doesn't matter".

Nice work. Especially with the explanations.

[quote='Berliner25']...I just enjoy the song.[/quote] 'Enjoy' is the keyword here, alongside passion, hard work and dedication -- tis something I value among my fellow translators. 5 stars.

Good job on a fairly hard text!

pretty good translation thanks a lot . In the line : "Alle haben Ziele, machen ihr Ding" --> "Everyone has goals; does his thing " instead of "do your thing" no ? pretty good though helped me a lot