Linda - Интеллектуальная Шлюха (Angol translation)

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Angol translation

Intelligent Whore

I stand waiting,
Against the fast-running clock,
The flucrum in desire -
In my thoughts I'll never give you out!
The difference in pain between us
We share with our game.
Who of them is you, who of them is me -
One wouldn't guess with the calendars.
The truth cuts the glass stronger.
The truth is the glass, that means it's more painful!
 
An intelligent whore without a primitive spirit!
I choose your game, maybe I'll be good with you!
An intelligent whore, a saber-toothed fly!
I choose your game, maybe I'll be good with you!
 
I will judge on my condition, -
To the closest, to the distant hearts of yours.
Life is a square, one story.
We'll be together without any dramas.
I am conquered by you,
And, as bad luck would have it, I am lucky now.
We together are shackled tightly
One love cast - a letter is being torn.
The truth cuts the glass stronger.
The truth is the glass, that means it's more painful!
 
An intelligent whore without a primitive spirit!
I choose your game, maybe I'll be good with you!
An intelligent whore, a saber-toothed fly!
I choose your game, maybe I'll be good with you!
 
An intelligent whore without a primitive spirit!
I choose your game, maybe I'll be good with you!
An intelligent whore, a saber-toothed fly!
I choose your game, maybe I'll be good with you!
 
Please don't hesitate to correct me, especially if the translation language is your native language.
With Best Regards,
© Alexander Laskavtsev
Kűldve: Alexander Laskavtsev Hétfő, 20/11/2017 - 08:08
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Kashtanka1965    Hétfő, 20/11/2017 - 10:26

Give you up.The truth is the glass. As bad luck wood have it. That means it's more painful. With you I will survive. I choose your game. I stand in anticipation. The foothold is in aspiration. The difference between our pain we divide with our game. We couldn't guess on the calendars. I will judge on my terms or on my condition.