Light of Aidan - Lament (Angol translation)

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Angol translation

Lament

Say you will not return
Sweetheart, since you flew away
I have no summer
Only the worst of winter
Since I lost you
 
Kűldve: hunhxc Szerda, 14/02/2018 - 05:11
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hunhxc    Szerda, 14/02/2018 - 05:14

What I don't get is why the singer wants her beloved to say that he won't return, when she's obviously suffering in solitude. If anyone has a reasonable idea, feel free to throw it here.