"There's a horrible transition going on the other end of the hall, too" sounds a bit confusing in my opinion. Did you mean "transition going + on the other end of the hall" or "transition going on"? At least I read "transition going on" and "the other end of the hall" without a preposition :P. Maybe "going" could be changed to "happening" or something similar (taking place/occurring)? Or you could just add another "on" before "the other end of the hall".
The dialect used is one of the Savonian dialects.
The lyrics are written in one of the Savonian dialects. Let me know if there are some mistakes!