Caramel (Caramelo)

traduzione in Inglese

Caramel

Versioni: #1#2
Kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss
with a touch of tenderness
and gently touch my lips
and I melt in her mouth
and her little eyes look at me
I go mad for her
 
I want, I want, I want, I want I want, I want
her to give me her waist
tie it in my mouth and sail
and let the wind takes us
wherever it wants to
 
caramel flavor
I adore you
I wish you
feeling the passion
you melt with pain
coffe flavor is your skin's flavor
your cinnamon lips
your kisses in the honey
 
the scent of your neck poisons me
and little by little bares me on the sand
I dream, I dream, I dream, I dream, I dream, I dream
awake
and tortures my mind
I want to make her love
to the rythm of the tide
 
ay! caramel flavor
I adore you
I wish you
feeling the passion
you melt with pain
coffe flavor is your skin's flavor
your cinnamon lips
your kisses in the honey
 
caramel flavor
I adore you
I wish you
feeling your warmth
passion perfume
caramel flavor is the flavor of your being caramel
 
caramel flavor
I adore you
I wish you
.....
caramel!!
 
Postato da laurismejia Dom, 15/01/2012 - 16:53
ringraziato 43 volte
UtenteTempo fa
shamsi.mohamad46 settimane 4 giorni
vida_loca3 anni 2 settimane
Gli ospiti hanno ringraziato 41 volte
Commenti
    settembre 15th, 2012

Here are some comments/suggestions to improve your English translation:

1. block 2, line 3 - you have: "tie it in my mouth and sail" - how about: "tie her in my boat and set sail"
2. The chorus, line 1: you have: "caramel flavor" - how about: "the taste of caramel"
3. The chorus, line 3 - you have: "I wish you" - how about: "I desire you" (or I want you)
4. The chorus, line 5 - you have: "you melt with pain" - how about: "you melt me with your smell"
5. The chorus, last 3 lines - how about: "Your skin has the taste of coffee (coffee has two "e"s) / your lips, cinnamon / your kisses, honey"
6. block 4, line 2 - you have: "bares me..." - how about: "she undresses me..."
7. block 4, line 3 - you have one too many "I dream"
7. block 4, line 5 - you have: "I want to make her love" - how about: "I want to make love to her"
8. block 4, line 6 - rythm is misspelled. It should be "rhythm"
9. block 6, line 5 - you have: "passion perfume" - how about: "the perfume of passion"
10. block 6, line 6 - you have: "caramel flavor is the flavor of your being caramel" - how about: "The taste of caramel is the taste of your being"

I hope these comments are helpful.