Testo della canzone: Carolus Rex (Swedish version)
1. | En livstid i krig [A Lifetime of War] |
2. | Ruina Imperii |
3. | Carolus Rex (Swedish version) |
Thanks for asking [@Fary]! :)
I only had the time to make a quick pass now, so I might have overlooked something (or even made an error myself), but these are the mistakes I spotted (some of which were pointed out by [@Nihilo] in their English translation):
1st stanza, 2nd line
"Hela Stockholm se mig krönas"
should be
"Hela Stockholm ser mig krönas"
4th stanza, last line
"...och därmed ska det ske"
should be
"...och därvid ska det ske"
or even
"...och därvid skall det ske"
(I'm leaning a bit towards the latter, even though it's not as clear as the other instances of "skall")
7th stanza, first line
"(Framåt Karoliner"
should be
"(Framåt karoliner"
8th stanza, first line
"Allt jag ser, hela vilden skall stoppa mig?"
should be
"Allt jag ser, vill ha mer, vem skall stoppa mig?"
9th stanza, 3rd line
"Vad jag vill skall bli mitt..."
should be
"Vad är ditt skall bli mitt..."
Great! *thumbs_up*
The time I will have available to spend on this website will unfortunately diminish a lot in the coming weeks and onwards, but if you need to have something else "proof-listened" (and if someone else doesn't beat me to it), I will do it when I next log in.
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