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The Traces Of Life

Still hidden are the souls,
Of the ends of unread tales and lives.
Despite my disbelief, stick in my mind the names,
Of the old seas, quiet lunatics.
 
Do not think that it is different
Your uncalled accountings to anyone,
The answers of the questions
Although I have not touched, still stays with me,
The faces of, the silent men,
The past times.
 
Has it tired you finally,
The traces of life, which traces you?
Has it slipped through your fingers,
Your unjust exhaustion.
 
PS: Any piece of constructive criticism will be very appreciated!
투고자: gamgin, 土, 14/10/2017 - 08:28
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