This is not a bad translation, but Yaremin sağalması doesn't mean "my wound bleeds", it is the opposite. It doesn't make sense that the lover's wound would bleed "after the darling comes" which should be a happy event.
Yaremin sağalması means yaramın iyileşmesi
And
Yarimi yada saldım doesn't mean i've released the darling
yada salmak means hatırlamak, anmak, düşünmek in Azeri Turkish.