-Proofreading-
"his habitat being so destroyed."
-hmm... The usage of "so" here conveys emphasis. I've only seen "damit" being used as a conjunctive adverb. Perhaps something like 'his habitat thus being destroyed'
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-Proofreading-
"his habitat being so destroyed."
-hmm... The usage of "so" here conveys emphasis. I've only seen "damit" being used as a conjunctive adverb. Perhaps something like 'his habitat thus being destroyed'
some minor fixes/suggestions:
überrollen den Wald - taking over the forest ("rolling through the forest", works too)
demands - demanding
typo: tared over = tarred over
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