Oh sword, planted deep inside!

Georgiano

Chakrulo (Tchakrulo)

ხმალო ხევსურეთს ნაჭედო,
თელავში თუშმა გაგფერა,
მეფე ე...რეკლემ გაკურთხა,
საომრად ჯვარი დაგწერა.

მტერო დამჩაგრე არ ვსტირი,
ტირილი დიაცთ წესია,
ბევრჯერ ვყოფილვარ ამ დღეში,
მაგრამ არ დამიკვნესია,
მაცადე ერთი ავლესო,
ხმალ–ჩახმახ ცეცხლის მკვესია,
სულ წმინდათ მოგამკევინო,
რაც ჩემთვის დაგითესია...

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Any word/text editing is welcomed.
This is one of the songs from the Voyager Golden Record.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Contents_of_the_Voyager_Golden_Record

Khmalo khevsurets nachedo,
Telavshi tushma gagfera,
mefe ereklem gakurtkha,
saomrad jvari dagtsera.

Mtero damchagre ar vstiri,
tirili diac tsesia,
bevrjer vkopilvar am dgeshi,
magram ar damikvnesia,
macade ertic gavleso,
khmal-chakhmakh ceckhlis mkvesia,
sul tsmindad mogamkevino,
rac chemtvis dagitesia, arkhialulailo harulailo

See video
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Inglês

Oh sword, planted deep inside!

Oh sword, forged in Khevuresti,
A Tushetian painted you in Telavi,
King Irakli consecrated you,
He drew upon you a cross for war.

Oh enemy come oppress me, I cry not,
For crying is the way of women,
I've been in this state many times,
But I have not groaned,
Hang on, let me sharpen
My sword-pistol, the steel that sparks the fire,
Let me use you to cleanly spark
That which you have sown for me.

Submetido por nik.datuashvili.1 em Segunda-feira, 09/09/2013 - 03:32
Last edited by nik.datuashvili.1 on Sexta-feira, 02/05/2014 - 00:22
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Lots of spelling mistakes in the Georgian text.

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fulicasenia     setembro 9th, 2013

ჩაკრულო isn't in any of the Georgian dictionaries I could find. "Put-out sword" just isn't English. It conjures up the image of a sword that was on fire but now someone has put out the fire, or of a sword that's been put out on the stoop like an empty milk bottle, for the blacksmith's boy to pick up on his morning rounds. I could imagine it could be "quenched sword" if the blacksmith has just plunged it into cold oil to harden it after forging it, or "drawn sword" if someone has just drawn it out of its scabbard, or "extended sword" if someone has just put it in position pointing straight out from the body towards its intended target.

nik.datuashvili.1     setembro 9th, 2013

The intention was "extinguished sword", though that first word didn't come to me as I wrote the title.

Anyways, that's not what it's supposed to mean. I misread the word ჩაკრულო. It literally means "planted within", with ambiguity as to what exactly it's inside of.

Calusarul     outubro 3rd, 2013

nik.datuashvili.1 ,can you help correcting those mistakes in the Georhian text ?

fulicasenia     setembro 10th, 2013

Hmmm, I kind of like that... the sword that's planted within the heart of every patriotic Georgian, to lend them strength and courage, or something, I guess... Since I'm a pacifist, I prefer metaphorical swords to real ones Wink