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Our Secrets

This ain't loving, this ain't loving.
That's much too much.
Like the colours in a bouquet our atoms have fused (x2)
 
Despite all roaming
Our come backs and departures,
Ups and downs
Against hope
 
Despite it all, our secrets
Will be carefully guarded
Sweetness, beauty
Our fused atoms
 
This ain't loving, this ain't loving.
That's much too much.
Like the colours in a bouquet our atoms are fused(x2)
 
Our atoms are fused(x2)
 
Despite it all, lifeless
In the centre or taken apart
Our bouquet is now
A little bit wane.
 
This ain't loving, this ain't loving.
That's much too much.
Like the colours in a bouquet our atoms are fused(x2)
 
Our atoms are fused(x2)
 
I wish I simply had
Courage to say that
I wish I simply had
Courage to offer you ....
 
I wish you had courage
To simply say that
I wish you had courage
To offer me ...
 
This ain't loving, this ain't loving.
That's much too much.
Like the colours in a bouquet our atoms are fused(x2)
 
Our atoms are fused(x2)
 
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Ahmadreza DavoudiAhmadreza Davoudi    Vineri, 10/09/2021 - 10:45

Dear Nadia! Hope you’re okay. You have a very good command of both languages. As I said before coherence is one of the intrinsic qualities of your language. Your translations are clear and comprehensible, with each part following on logically from the one before. Your lines are written in a formal style and register but they’re not abrupt and I think it’s wonderful. Long story short, your work adheres to all of my standards. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
BTW I loved this song and I keep listening to it inevitably 😅

Regards, Ahmadreza

sandringsandring
   Luni, 13/09/2021 - 06:24

:*) Thank you, Ahmadreza.

I've been trying to do my best to please the readers. Your nice words are very much appreciated.