Hi! I have another version, where I built on what you did... what do you think? Thanks!

Torete
Sandali na lang
Maari bang pagbigyan
Aalis na nga

Maari bang hawakan ang
iyong mga kamay

Sana ay maabot ng langit
ang iyong mga ngiti
Sana ay masilip

REFRAIN:
'Wag kang mag-alala
Di ko ipipilit sa'yo
Kahit na lilipad ang isip
ko'y torete sa'yo

Ilang gabi pa nga lang
Nang tayo'y pinagtagpo
Na parang may tumulak
nanlalamig nanginginig na ako

Akala ko nung una
May bukas ang ganito

Mabuti pang umiwas

Pero salamat na rin at nagtagpo

CHORUS:
Torete, torete, torete ako
Torete, torete, torete, sa iyo

(Repeat Refrain)
(Repeat Chorus)

Mesmerized.

A few moments more
Can you give me a chance?
I will be leaving..

May I please hold
your hands?

Hoping that the heavens
Will match up to your smiles
Hoping to catch a glimpse of it

REFRAIN:
Don't worry
I won't insist / impose on you
No matter how my thoughts fly
I'm mesmerized on you.

It's only been few nights
since we were made to meet
It's as if someone has pushed me
And now I'm shivering, and I can’t wait

At first I thought
there would be a tomorrow
for this type of thing

I think it's better to avoid this

But I'm still thankful that we have met.

CHORUS:
Mesmerized, mesmerized, I am mesmerized
Mesmerized, mesmerized, mesmerized on you.
(Moonstar88 English Translation)
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