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Convite

Sim não falo só por mim eu quero-te a provar do que é teu
Agora sim eu falava do que eu sinto
É por força do desejo ser eu
 
Por força do que é meu és tudo o que eu vejo
 
Ontem tudo o que eu queria era subir ao teu corpo
Eu passei no teu medo e esqueci o teu ego
És tudo o que eu vejo
 
Ontem tudo o que eu queria era subir ao teu ego
Eu passei no teu medo e esqueci o teu corpo
 
És tudo o que eu vejo
 
De repente o assunto é assunto
E tu mergulhas bem fundo fugindo do amor
Cá estarei no fim dessa espera até ao tempo do que era
E não volta a ser
 
Sim não falo só por mim eu quero-te a provar do que é teu
Agora sim eu falava do que eu sinto
É por força do desejo ser eu
 
Por força do que é teu és tudo o que eu vejo
 
Agora desisto sempre que eu insisto eu esqueço que existo
Isto é só um convite
 
Перевод

Invitation

Yes, I don't say that just for me, I want you to taste what is yours
Just now I talked about what I feel
It's by the desire force to be me
 
By force of everything that is mine, you're everything I see
 
Yesterday, everything I wanted was to go up on your body
I passed by your fear, and I forgot your ego
It's everything what I see
 
Yesterday everything I wanted was to go up on your ego
I passed by your fear, and I forgot your ego
 
It's everything what I see
 
Suddenly the topic is topic
And you sink into the deepness to get away from love
Here I'll be, at the end of this long waiting, at that time when I was
and I can't be it again
 
Yes, I don't say that just for me, I want you to taste what is yours
Just now I talked about what I feel
It's by the desire force to be me
 
By force of everything that is mine, you're everything I see
 
Now I give up, because everytime I insist I forget that I do exist
This is just an invitation
 
Pluto (Portugal): Топ 3
Комментарии
LevinaSunLevinaSun    сб, 21/07/2012 - 16:20

Good translation. I'll add one thing though:
És tudo o que eu vejo = You're everything I see

LemoncholicLemoncholic    ср, 08/08/2012 - 19:59

So, this is the last song for me to check. Let's get it started.

>Yesterday everything I wanted was go up on your body
"...everything I wanted was to go up on your body." Same with "...on your ego."

>Now I give up, always that I insist on it I forget that I do exist
Here comes the tricky line. How about this? "Now I give up, everytime I insist I forget that I do exist."

That's all. :)

dowlenon1dowlenon1
   ср, 08/08/2012 - 22:56

Hi again! :D

The second one I totally agree, I even would add "because everytime I insist..." to make it better. However, the first one I don't understand what you mean.

What you mean "Same with "... on your ego"? If you are talking about this part: "I passed by your fear, and I forgot your ego", would you suggest I put "and I forgot on your ego"?

LemoncholicLemoncholic    чт, 09/08/2012 - 09:32

I mean that you've forgotten to add the "to" before the verb, that's all. ;)

"Yesterday everything I wanted was to go up on your ego."