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So, this is the last song for me to check. Let's get it started.
>Yesterday everything I wanted was go up on your body
"...everything I wanted was to go up on your body." Same with "...on your ego."
>Now I give up, always that I insist on it I forget that I do exist
Here comes the tricky line. How about this? "Now I give up, everytime I insist I forget that I do exist."
That's all. :)
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The second one I totally agree, I even would add "because everytime I insist..." to make it better. However, the first one I don't understand what you mean.
What you mean "Same with "... on your ego"? If you are talking about this part: "I passed by your fear, and I forgot your ego", would you suggest I put "and I forgot on your ego"?
I mean that you've forgotten to add the "to" before the verb, that's all. ;)
"Yesterday everything I wanted was to go up on your ego."
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Good translation. I'll add one thing though:
És tudo o que eu vejo = You're everything I see