;) 1/4 tu ne sois éloignée ...>éloigné.......Elle parle de lui donc é
1/6 the distance grows....>l'écartement grandit......l´éloignement grandit me semple plus approprié ou on s'éloigne
2/If this moment must be our last...>Si s'est notre dermier moment ce moment même...trop de répétitions
2/4J'entends un voix silencieux..>une voix silencieuse
.Le titre est correct
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