Thank you for your feedback, Fani. It makes me feel good to know that my Italian is improving ;)
I sure allow to leave any comment, specially because if something is wrong in my translation, it needs to be corrected.
However, in that case, I thought 'when you arrive' because it would be strange to write 'arriving at the stars' (at least, that's what I thought when translating this). I know it's not accurate, but (I believe) it means the same thing. :(
Regards.
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