Старая военная (Staraya voennaya) (إلى الإنكليزية ترجم)

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Старая военная (Staraya voennaya)

Отшумели песни нашего полка.
Отзвенели звонкие копыта.
Пулями пробито днище котелка.
Маркитантка юная убита.
Пулями пробито днище котелка.
Маркитантка юная убита...
 
Нас осталось мало, мы да наша боль.
Нас немного и врагов немного.
Живы мы покуда - фронтовая голь,
А воскреснем, - райская дорога.
Живы мы покуда - фронтовая голь,
А воскреснем, - райская дорога.
 
Руки на прикладе, голова в тоске.
А душа уже взлетела вроде.
Для чего мы пишем кровью на песке?
Наши письма не нужны природе.
Для чего мы пишем кровью на песке?
Наши письма не нужны природе.
 
Спите себе братцы, всё придет опять.
Новые родятся командиры.
Новые солдаты станут получать
Вечные казенные квартиры.
Новые солдаты станут получать
Вечные казенные квартиры.
 
Спите себе братцы, все вернется вновь
Все должно в природе повториться.
И слова и пули, и любовь и кровь.
Времени не будет помириться.
И слова и пули, и любовь и кровь.
Времени не будет помириться.
 
Давай!
 
Отшумели песни нашего полка.
Отзвенели звонкие копыта.
Пулями пробито днище котелка.
Маркитантка юная убита.
Пулями пробито днище котелка.
Маркитантка юная убита...
 
تم نشره بواسطة sam_lsam_l في الأحد, 20/01/2019 - 22:51
تم تعديله آخر مرة بواسطة ltlt في الثلاثاء, 19/03/2019 - 10:12

An old song about war

النسخ: #1#2
The songs of our regiment have been sung.
Our horses' hooves became silent.
Bullets pierced the bottom of our cooking pot.
Our young canteen girl has been killed.
Bullets pierced the bottom of our cooking pot.
Our young canteen girl has been killed.
 
There are few of us left, just us and our pain.
There's not many of us, nor of the enemy.
Yet we, the cannon fodders, are still alive somewhere,
and the road to heavens awaits those who fell.
Yet we, the cannon fodders, are still alive somewhere,
and the road to heavens awaits those who fell.
 
Hands on the breeches1, heads in sorrow.
As for our souls, they already soared away.
Why do we write in blood on the sand?
Nature has no use for our letters.
Why do we write in blood on the sand?
Nature has no use for our letters.
 
Sleep on, brothers, it will all happen again.
New commanders will be born,
and new soldiers will be granted
accommodations2 the State will own forever.
New soldiers will be granted
accommodations the State will own forever.
 
Sleep on, brothers, it will all come back.
Everything is meant to repeat itself in nature.
Words as well as bullets, love as well as blood.
There will never be time to make peace.
Words as well as bullets, love as well as blood.
There will never be time to make peace.
 
Come on!
 
The songs of our regiment have been sung.
Our horses' hooves became silent.
Bullets pierced the bottom of our cooking pot.
Our young canteen girl has been killed.
Bullets pierced the bottom of our cooking pot.
Our young canteen girl has been killed...
 
  • 1. technically the shutter on a rifle that you pull to load a new cartridge into the breech
  • 2. might be an allusion to mass graves
تم نشره بواسطة ضيفضيف في الجمعة, 08/02/2019 - 15:01
Added in reply to request by sam_lsam_l
تعليقات الكاتب:

Okudzhava's poetry is unmistakable. They changed a few words here and there, but the meaning remains about the same.

كاتب الترجمة يطلب التصحيح، بمعنى أنه سيكون سعيدا لتلقي التعديلات والاقتراحات حول ترجمته، إن كنت محترفا في كلتا اللغتين فتعليقاتك ستكون موضع ترحيب
ترجمات أخرى للأغنية "Старая военная ..."
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St. SolSt. Sol    الجمعة, 08/02/2019 - 16:58

Few corrections:
Отзвенели == [the songs] (have) finished playing
Живы мы покуда - фронтовая голь, == As long as we live, we are the front line poors {i.e.: cannon fodder)
Вечные казенные квартиры == forever state-owned apartments (i.e., never to be our own)
Спите себе братцы == Keep sleeping, brothers
Времени не будет помириться. == There won't [ever] be time to make peace (or: for peace)

Regards, St.

ingirumimusnocteingirumimusnocte    الجمعة, 08/02/2019 - 17:04

Thank you kindly, this one was definitively outside my Russian comfort zone Regular smile

BratBrat    الجمعة, 08/02/2019 - 17:08

ennemy->enemy (a typo)

ingirumimusnocteingirumimusnocte    الجمعة, 08/02/2019 - 17:11

Thanks, I've been writing English like French yet again Regular smile

BratBrat    الجمعة, 08/02/2019 - 17:16

This seems to be one of your "subtelties". Wink smile

ingirumimusnocteingirumimusnocte    الجمعة, 08/02/2019 - 17:18

That's a really nice name for my persistent inability to handle double consonants.

BratBrat    الجمعة, 08/02/2019 - 17:21

Oh, I thought it was "scrapping the barrel's bottom"... Teeth smile

ingirumimusnocteingirumimusnocte    الجمعة, 08/02/2019 - 17:22

That too, but I would rather call that necessity than subtelty Wink smile

BratBrat    الجمعة, 08/02/2019 - 17:25

Yeah, we all have many features that make us recognisable.

ingirumimusnocteingirumimusnocte    الجمعة, 08/02/2019 - 17:30

Hopefully so. I wonder if that will still be true after a couple decades talking indiscriminately to neural networks and humans. Hopefully either I or Google will be dead before that happens.

BratBrat    الجمعة, 08/02/2019 - 17:39

Well, as Google seems to be half-dead nowadays, we won't have to wait for ages...

ingirumimusnocteingirumimusnocte    الجمعة, 08/02/2019 - 17:43

Mmm... So had been Apple during the 90's. The sooner mankind is rid of this monster the better, but I'm afraid we'll have to be content with wishful thinking for quite a while before that happens.

SchnurrbratSchnurrbrat    الأربعاء, 13/03/2019 - 20:38

Hi, ingirumimusnocte.

Just curious about this verse:
Новые солдаты будут получать
Вечные казенные квартиры.

Could it be that it is not about apartments at all?
A WW2 song, and maybe it is not about real estate, but more of Eternal apartments - like new soldiers will be put to rest in the ground, just like our generation? That's my understanding, not sure if it is correct one, but to me it make sense with line Спите себе братцы, все вернется вновь.
And previous verses are pretty doomed too - blood-on-the-sand; road to heaven. Maybe I just let my imagination go to far, but...

ingirumimusnocteingirumimusnocte    الأربعاء, 13/03/2019 - 21:19

That's an interesting interpretation. I'm afraid my Russian is not good enough to get a feel for that kind of symbolism, but Okudzhava certainly used a lot of allusive metaphors. I've added a small footnote.

valeryvdrvaleryvdr    الأربعاء, 24/04/2019 - 04:07

Definitely "Вечные казенные квартиры" does not mean apartments, it means a final resting place. Otherwise it does not make any sense, conscripted solders were not given any real estate for their service.

SchnurrbratSchnurrbrat    الأربعاء, 24/04/2019 - 04:14

Well, thanks. But we just need Pierre back for that =(

ltlt    الثلاثاء, 19/03/2019 - 10:13

The source lyrics have been updated. Please review your translation.

BratBrat    الثلاثاء, 19/03/2019 - 14:11

Though reviewing will require only copypasting the last 2 lines of each stanza... Regular smile