Questa canzone (превод на английски)

превод на английскианглийски

This Song

I sing this song for you
Just to torment you a little
To go back there for a moment
With you, who cannot say "no"
I sing this song for you
And I already know what you'll do
Now you won't pretend to be anything
But on the other hand, you will tremble
Don't reveal your feelings to others
Keep doing what you do
Don't stop my only love
Everything remains between us
I just wanted to tell you again
That has never gone
You hear me, as then
Even if you never say it
I sing this song for you
To hurt, maybe a little
Because you know, that at least inside,
You still won't have lost me, no.
Translation done by Alma Barroca. In case you want to reprint it, please ask for permission first and always cite my name as its author. /
Tradução feita por Alma Barroca. Caso você queira reutilizá-la, por favor peça por permissão antes e sempre cite meu nome como o do autor.
Публикувано от Alma BarrocaAlma Barroca в съб., 01/09/2012 - 15:11
Последно редактирано от Alma BarrocaAlma Barroca в ср., 17/07/2019 - 20:44
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Thanks to ahmed k. for providing suggestions of improvements.


Questa canzone

Vimto12Vimto12    съб., 01/09/2012 - 18:26

Nice translation Regular smile
Just a few things:
Verse 2, line 3: 'pretend anything' sounds a bit odd, I think it needs to be followed by a verb to make sense, maybe 'pretend to be anything'...
Verse 2, line 4: 'on the other hand'
Verse 3, line 4: maybe 'between us'...
Verse 5, line 3/4: 'you know that at least inside you...'/ 'you know that inside you at least...'

Alma BarrocaAlma Barroca    ср., 17/07/2019 - 20:45

Hi, Ahmed. Thanks for your comment. I've edited the translation now. It looks finer now.