Dora Vysotskaya - What are your thoughts about?

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What are your thoughts about?

What are your thoughts about?
Only we're staying in this cafe
In silence like every day
Are you still here or gone?
What are your thoughts about?
 
We were connected by one fate
We're two planets or two states
We're screams of love or maybe hate
What are your thoughts about?
 
So close but now you're so far...
My heart's burning but you're a distant star
You were my life, today my scars...
What are your thoughts about?
 
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Публикувано от ГостГост в втор., 20/08/2019 - 19:53
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.@sandring Many thanks to Nadia for having the enormous patience to correct my poem Regular smile if the translators want, they can correct their translations, I'm very grateful for those translations. Thank to all of you :

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Also many thanks to .@shumbrat for the correction (sorry some of my emails are deleted Sad smile by mistake)

 

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Dora VysotskayaDora Vysotskaya    пет., 06/09/2019 - 06:04

.@WW give me this corrections, big thanks for correct my first English poem (don't know why some messages got deleted Sad smile )

What Are You Thinking Of?

We were just sitting in this café
In silence as if everyday
Are you still here, or did you go away?
What are you thinking of?

We were connected by one fate
We're two of a kind, yes, two mates
We're screams of love, or maybe hate
What are you thinking of?

So close, but now you're so far...
My heart burns because you're a distant star
You were my life, today only my scars...
What are you thinking of?

sandringsandring    ср., 04/09/2019 - 10:32

Dora, thank you for your tribute. Please, remember to correct the title as well. Btw, we all want your Spanish translation of this poem. Those few lines that you'd shared sounded absolutely heavenly to my ears. Good luck! Regular smile

Dora VysotskayaDora Vysotskaya    пет., 06/09/2019 - 06:03

Thanks to you for correcting this poem Regular smile I post the Spanish translation but it's hard/impossible to rhytm. Hope you like it:)