Looking for a native or fluent Japanese speaker to review these lyrics.

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<a href="/bg/translator/connor-langille" class="userpopupinfo" rel="user1399875">Connor Langille <div class="author_icon" title="Page author" ></div></a>
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https://lyricstranslate.com/en/cramb-crashers-one-lyrics.html use this is the link in the post doesn't work https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YKqHrt3E35M.

I asked if these can be transcribed and a native Japanese speaker managed to do one of them but even they aren't 100% sure so I was wondering if someone who thinks they could do better could take a look at them

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<a href="/bg/translator/tony-burgos" class="userpopupinfo" rel="user1464624">tony burgos </a>
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こんにちは、あなたの歌詞を見てみましたが、とても良いと思います。 おめでとうございます。