Променяй ме сега (ইতালীয় অনুবাদ)


Променяй ме сега

Моля се на Теб Исус
Прости ми грешките
Жив да съм пред тебе аз
В присъствието ти
Променяй ме сега
да бъда твой слуга
Небето да блести
В моите очи
miti.purnarov দ্বারা বৃহস্পতি, 26/05/2016 - 19:00 তারিখ সাবমিটার করা হয়
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Cambiami ora

Prego a te, Gesù
Pardona miei sbagli
Che sono vito davanti te
In tua presenza
Cambiami ora
Che sono tuo servante
Che il cielo brilla
In miei occhi
miti.purnarov দ্বারা শুক্র, 27/05/2016 - 04:53 তারিখ সাবমিটার করা হয়
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Hampsicora    শনি, 28/05/2016 - 16:44

Hello Dimitar, please forgive my intrusion. I would suggest you to click on the green button “Request proofreading” when you are translating into languages you don’t know very well, so other users can notice your request and help you.
Anyway, your translation isn’t so bad, it’s quite understandable. These are my suggestions:
Prego a te > Ti prego
Pardona > Perdona
Che sono vito > Io sono vivo
Che sono tuo servante > Che io sia il tuo servo
brilla > risplenda
In miei > Nei miei