Утро таяло в тумане (Englisch Übersetzung)


Утро таяло в тумане

Утро таяло в тумане,
Шелестели камыши.
Грациозные, как лани,
Шли по полю алкаши.
Von St. SolSt. Sol am Mo, 25/03/2019 - 20:28 eingetragen
Englisch Übersetzung (äqui-rhythmisch, reimend)
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Misty Dawn Was Turning Clear

Misty dawn was turning clear,
Reeds were rustling in the weald.
Graceful as young fallow deer
Drunks were walking through the field.
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Von St. SolSt. Sol am Mo, 25/03/2019 - 23:40 eingetragen
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UncommonUncommon    Mo, 25/03/2019 - 23:46

It seems like it wasn't too difficult?
Also it is nice that singular and plural are the same.

St. SolSt. Sol    Mo, 25/03/2019 - 23:48

Everything seems simple when you see the result Regular smile
The first line required some mental work though.

UncommonUncommon    Mo, 25/03/2019 - 23:50

It just rhymes do not look super invented, and weald is nice find, although it makes it a bit less Russian.

Pinhas ZelenogorskyPinhas Zelenogorsky    Di, 26/03/2019 - 00:00

Наблюдал эту прекрасную сцену около Лахтинского разлива, там много камышей.
Сознательно ушли от "шумел камыш"?