Great! The metaphors are a treat and I absolutely love the message of the song.
Just a few more questions if you don't mind:
Hızır bashaw -> is that a super ruler title ("vizier pasha" like "his majesty our royal higness the king") or two different titles (hey you viziers and pashas !), or the name of an actual character or something else I have no clue about?
holds the birds' noses to the grindstone and plumes on -> The (bad) guy sharpens the bird's beak and then grooms its feathers???
I suppose you'll end up with an outraged, hurting and moderately more dangerous bird, but that seems like a peculiar thing to do :D
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