Autumn Dusk (Russisch Übersetzung)


Autumn Dusk

I saw above a sea of hills
A solitary planet shine,
And there was no one, near or far,
To keep the world from being mine.
Von LobolyrixLobolyrix am Di, 27/04/2021 - 16:50 eingetragen
Zuletzt von sandringsandring am Do, 06/05/2021 - 18:05 bearbeitet
Russisch ÜbersetzungRussisch (metrisch, poetisch, reimend)
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Осень. Сумерки

Над морем холмов в вышине
Луна одиноко грустит.
Одиноко,грустно и мне,
Зато Бог мне весь мир дарит.
thanked 3 times
This is a poetic translation - deviations from the meaning of the original are present (extra words, extra or omitted information, substituted concepts).
Von Dr_IgorDr_Igor am Fr, 07/05/2021 - 16:33 eingetragen
Vera JahnkeVera Jahnke    Fr, 07/05/2021 - 20:54

Not word-by-word of course, but I like this one of your interpretations best.

Dr_IgorDr_Igor    Sa, 08/05/2021 - 00:41

I agree. This one stands on its own. You feel poetry better than anybody I know. Honored to be read by you, Vera.
And look at those German starry fireworks :-)

Vera JahnkeVera Jahnke    Sa, 08/05/2021 - 13:19

...and you were our inspiration, you and the other Russian translators here. Thank you for that, too! 💞
BTW - your above version has inspired me for a second one with a similar content...

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