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1. | On écrit sur les murs |
2. | Mama Africa |
3. | Le monde nous appartiendra |
1. | un beau jour |
You're welcome.
Thanks for rating my translation.
The English is pretty awkward
I'm not a fluent French speaker, but the English lines make total sense for me. I'd give this translation 4 stars because there are a couple of mistakes here and there, and I'd also not translate some lines like Nemo did. But this is not a bad translation.
Can you please provide suggestions of improvements that this translation could receive instead of simply saying it's bad and awkward?
I decided to just make a new translation
The source lyrics have been updated. Please review your translation:
"Donnons-leur écrits" > "donnons-leur un cri"