[SOLVED] Transcription - help me

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<a href="/el/translator/willian" class="userpopupinfo username" rel="user1355522">Willian</a>
Ημ. Εγγραφής: 22.09.2017
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Hello, I tried to write this song, maybe someone could currect me, plese.

https://youtu.be/vBxfq32KaH4

I cry out
When I tought (?)
In the moment You came
And You gave all that You had to give
Now my life isn't same

As to need You tonights
Like a candle of flame
I was Lost, than You show me the Way
You are lights

(?)by this world
Facinated by lies
(?)
Faded away by the lie

As to need You tonights
Like a candle of flame
I was Lost, than You show me the Way
Your light shine (?) me today

Oh no, it's not over
I will not give in
I will fight, I'll fight to carry on
In Jesus Christ I'm winning

Oh no, it's not over
I will not give in
I will fight, I'll fight to carry on
In Jesus Christ I'm winning

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<a href="/el/translator/flora-lama" class="userpopupinfo username" rel="user1503836">Flora Lama</a>
Ημ. Εγγραφής: 11.06.2021

I cried out
When I thought
i would break
in a moment you came
And You gave me all that You had to give
Now my life is not the same

I still need You tonight
Like the candle of the flame
I was Lost, then You showed me the Way
You are light

Maybe is strange
i was clot by the storm
maiden strains
Facinated by lies
but if i could clean like an eclipse moon
Faded away by the lie

I still need You tonight
Like the candle of the flame
I was Lost, then You showed me the Way
You are light
shines through me today

Oh no, it's not over
I will not give in
I will fight, I'll fight to carry on
In Jesus Christ I'm winning

Oh no, it's not over
I will not give in
I will fight, I'll fight to carry on
In Jesus Christ I'm winning

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<a href="/el/translator/flora-lama" class="userpopupinfo username" rel="user1503836">Flora Lama</a>
Ημ. Εγγραφής: 11.06.2021

i am not sure though, ask for a second opinion

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<a href="/el/translator/sandring" class="userpopupinfo username" rel="user1263066">sandring</a>
Ημ. Εγγραφής: 18.10.2015

I cried out
When I thought
I would break
In a moment you came
And You gave all that You had to give
Now my life's not the same

I still need You tonight
Like the candle the flame
I was lost, then You showed me the Way
You are light

And it seems
I was caught by the storm
Fascinated by lies
But the gleam of the glittering moon
Faded away by the lights

I still need You tonight
Like the candle the flame
I was lost, then You showed me the Way
Your light shines through me today

Oh now it's not over
I will not give in
I will fight, I'll fight to carry on
With Jesus Christ I'm a winner

PS. I still need You tonight like the candle the flame = like the candle needs the flame

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<a href="/el/translator/flora-lama" class="userpopupinfo username" rel="user1503836">Flora Lama</a>
Ημ. Εγγραφής: 11.06.2021

BRAVO!! " But the gleam of the glittering moon" wow !!! Regular smile

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<a href="/el/translator/willian" class="userpopupinfo username" rel="user1355522">Willian</a>
Ημ. Εγγραφής: 22.09.2017

thank you all. you guys are top 10. I was happy for the small amount of mistakes I made.